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The Asylum

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Jacob looks up at the old crumbling building of the old town asylum. He swallows as he pulls out his flashlight and camera. He turns them both on and begins to walk into the asylum. He looks around to see if there was anyone there. 'What are you? Stupid?! Of course there's no one here.' he thinks to himself as he mentally facepalms himself. He enters the building and begins to explore the rooms and offices. As he looks around, he hears giggling and running. Jacob turns his head to the noise and follows. He continuously looks around to search where the noise came from. He then hears more giggling. But this time, it was closer. He turns his head to see a beautiful woman with blond hair and wearing a white dress. He looks at the woman and ask," Who are you?" The woman looks at him and says in a quiet, yet insane tone," You should not have come here." Jacob looks at the woman and gives here a confused look. "What?" Then the woman looks at him with anger and insanity and yells, " YOU SHOULD NOT HAVE COME HERE!" and begins to scream. Jacob then screams and runs from the woman. The demon chases him and has him running through the asylum. He turns his head sideways and sees the walls written on with blood saying," HELP ME," or saying, " WE ARE ALL GOING TO HELL," He turns his head to see the woman was now a black cloud following him. He screams louder and begins to run faster. he tries to open doors but finds them all locked or dead ends. He looks around to see another ghost but of a young girl. The young girl puts her finger over her lips as she gets closer to Jacob. Jacob looks confused as the girl gets closer and closer. As the girl touches Jacob's arm, he flinches at the girl's cold touch. The ghost then looks at him with blank eyes and says," Follow me. I'll keep you safe." Jacob then follows the girl as she leads him to a door. The girl then turns to look at Jacob," I was the one who found this door. But I couldn't escape. Only the living could escape." Jacob looks at the girl with sad eyes." How old are you?" " I was sent here when I was 10. I died when I was 15. They sent me here cause I watched my father kill my mother and then kill himself. I went mad and was sent here." Jacob then feels tears coming out of his eyes. A loud roar was heard and Jacob begins to panic. The girl looks at him and says," Don't worry. Go and I'll keep it busy." Jacob nods and says," Thank you so much." The girl smiles and says," Your welcome." Jacob opens the door and runs out of the asylum as fast as he could. The girl then is swallowed by the demonic cloud and dies along with the asylum. Jacob looks at the asylum and begins to cry softly. Never to forget his incident with the ghost girl.
Sorry if it sucks. This is for AnarchyWriter. It's more sad then scary. Don't like? Don't read. For those who read and like, Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoyed. You too AnachyWriter. :)
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Very Nice, Very nice, the only complaints I have is the shortness, though I can't really complain because of how short I made your commission. Overall, I really liked it.